Ragnarok Ghost Stories Options

[Malaya]

Prelude

Come hither and listen
To the stories foretold
Whence twilight beckons thee, fear shall be known,
The forest of Payon shall speak thee of lost children.
And have ye heard of thy maiden who died a Virgin?

Come hither and feel,
The darkness unfolds.
When darkness holds ones heart
In to the crypts of the unknown.
Then be feeble, and groan
Else let yer soul be snatched by the Dark Lord
In to hells abode

Come hither children, come hither
Tis the season of the dead.
Let the 100 Ghost stories of Midgard begin
Let the blood flow from the undead
Come hither…come hither
It's the souls time to be unrest.
.


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This only the opening poem of the short fics that me and Otokomae a good friend of mine will be doing. In celebration of the upcoming Day of the dead, All souls day and Hallowen
Please enjoy. Thank you

Oneshot Ghosts stories welcome

This post has been edited by Goenitz: Sep 27 2006, 01:18 AM

[liureiyi]

purely ghost stories,.. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/mellow.gif)


bago ito sa fan fic,.. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

i'll be waiting for the updates,.. /no1

[Sean_09]

100 ghost stories weeeeeee~~ this is fun! reminds me of xxxholic episode 10
I'll be waiting (IMG:style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

[Thor94]

masaya 2 parang tru phil ghost stories but straight from rb wahaha

[Malaya]

Otokomae is still atking time on writing the starter fic for this thread so I'll go on ahead and post mine.

This is a Botter's Ghost story. Don't worry di me Bot advocate

I used here character names of great novelist known for making mystery and horror novels.

Hope you enjoy and advanced happy Haloween


ThIS IS FIC NUMBER 1 for the 100 Ghost stories
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An Urdr urban Legend

Chant
~Tune from Mary had a little Lamb~

" Have you seen the wicker man?
The wicker man? The wicker man?
Have you seen the wicker man
that walks on Yuno Lane?"

He takes his blade out his sheath
Out his sheath, Out his sheath...
He takes his Blade out his sheath
and out your heart comes out..."

--
Intro:
Ragnarok Online is a game unfortunately plague by Bots. Hated by players, despised by many... However one stands legendary.
Have you ever heard of the Bot in Urdr Server. The one that Bots to kill.
He hunts solely for killing people...and they say if they take your game out in the game...
So does your soul in real life.
You will know if he's the bot we say. Because before he makes his kill...he circles around you.
And before you die. The last thing you will hear is the sound of bells ringing tingling.

--

"RUBBISH!!" Edgar Allan Poe uttered mockingly at the story Nathaniel Hawthorne just narrated.

" In all my experience playing the world of Urdr, I have known every Bot in the map. Especially those who patrol my territory."

" Ahh and I wonder why the great undisputed Guilds Master Edgar Allan Poe of the Novels Guild hasn't yet been apprehended. When you yourself is a botter? the vanguards should have your lions up at their trophy hall." Mary Shelly, the rouge said from behind the pub counter.

Edgar chuckled back. " Thats why it's titled undisputed my dear...No one not even those lame brain called GM's or vanguards will even put me down.
And you Nathaniel. " He turned to the blue haired priest, " Get those damn rumors about serial bots and urband legends out of your head. Seriously, where do you get such trash?"

Nathaniel had a thoughtful look on his face. " But they say the rumors are true. Plus the said Bot has no master. Bram said his party mate disappeared during an Edgga hunt. When he called his house his family said that the boy was found in his room his wrist slashed."

" Again Rubbish. Bram's party mates are known real life thugs and addicts. He himself got beaten at his front porch." Egdar retorted back, he was getting annoyed. He stod up and drank his Blue potion. " I'm leaving."

" Already darling?" Mary teased.
" I’m going on a Baphomet hunt." Edgar was already setting up his skills.
" Why don't you just Bot it. You can beat the crap of that with your eyes closed... come hunt with me instead." Mary tried to win him over.

" FEH, I’m bored." Edgar left. The voices of Mary and Nathaniel laughter slowly echoing away as he walked out of the pub.

--
The Maze

"Huff... Huff ... Huff" Blood was dripping out from his pole axe. The severed head of Baphomet laying at his feet. And other hunters staring in awe as he single-handedly defeated the monster with little ease.

He was deep in the Maze just outside of Prontera. He just needed to navigate his way out when suddenly from another entrance a young female acolyte bumped in to him

" Please help me!" She cried. " Please help me, he's after me!"
Edgar was obviously irked. he does not like whiny little children coming at him for help. However the desperation of this one particular girl caught his curiosity.
" Who's after you?"
Just before she could answer an assassin came out from the same entrance she entered. He had a grin on his face that stated he was out for blood. Edgar looked at the name. Huntsman. " Hey you. You bothering this kid?" Edgar shouted to the assassin.

The assassin only replied back with a laughing emoticon. He approached closer then took a slash at Edgar.
"Nooo! Don’t hurt me!" The acolyte screamed. She threw a heal at Edgar. Who had very little damage from the attack.
" Save your SP." Edgard brandished his spear. " You'll pay for that you B*****D!" he lunged in and poked his spear right through the assassins’ chest. he took only a small damage him self. And was laughing still. Some how Edgar was able to push the man near the warp entrance and the assassin disappeared for a moment only to re-enter
then disappear.

" Holy S****! That runt was a botter." Edgar realized as he watched the assassin warped in and out of the entrance. The name was unfamiliar, it was then he remembered what Nathaniel said back in the pub about the urban legend of the serial killer botter. Edgar took his spear and gave the bot a couple more stabs. In a few minutes the Assassin was laying down dead, and disappeared back to its spawn point.

Edgar went back the acolyte who was now standing quietly in a corner.
" Thank you." she mumbled. " I'm lost."
" An acolyte shouldn’t be here in the first place. Damn it I'll walk you out." He went ahead her and entered the portal beside him.

At the other end Edgar waited for her to come out. Pondering how can an aco survive the 2nd level of the maze alone. Suddenly his screen started to static. When it cleared up, the aco maiden was by his side.
"Over here." And he guided the girl through the maze. However for some reason he could not find the last map out. 20 minutes passed. When he realized the girl barely spoke a word but just slowly followed him. Edgar was now very irritated and felt his time was wasted.

" Look here, " He finally said. " I have to leave you here I still have somewhere else to be. " I already helped you out and stuff so I guess you can manage on your own now."

The acolyte was silent for a moment. Edgar got up to leave. when he heard her say again " Please help me."

" Look lady, I don’t have the time. If your soo concerned getting out of here, why don’t you just have yourself killed and you'll spawn back to where you came from."

" Please help me..."

" Are YOU EVEN LISTENING?"

" Please help me..."

" Damn it are you freaking dumb or what?" He was angry now.

" Please help me, please help me he's following me."

Edgar now realized he has been played. The acolyte was actually a bot herself. He called out more a couple of phrases only to get the same automated reply. Edgar took out his spear. " What I hate the most is someone who wastes my time." He slashed the spear through her and she fell almost quickly still murmuring " Please help me..."

Edgar's screen went on static again. By the time it cleared up his screen had a hazy shade of dark blue.
Edgar real self felt hungry and decided to Bot his way out of the map.
He programmed his computer with the right kore program and initiated the command.

It was already 11: 17 at night. Edgar went down to get some snacks. He was home alone that evening. As he was drinking his beer he thought he heard a song of a child singing a song in the tune of Mary had a little Lamb.

Have you seen the wicker man?
The wicker man? The wicker man?
Have you seen the wicker man
that walks on Yuno Lane?

Edgar looked around, and looked outside the deserted side street of his home. No one not even a dog was out. His mind must be playing tricks on him out of hunger.
Edgar decided to go back up to see the progress of his character.
Only to discover that his character has now wandered on some unknown map outside Yuno and his chatlog flooded with the words
"Please help me... Please help me."

"WHAT THE HELL!!" he took over his character and scrolled up the chat screen. It was endlessly flooded with the same phrase.

Edgar ran around the map trying to find the entrance out. His chat once more again came out with the same phrases " Please help me, please help me"

He found a warp zone. It was the entrance to Yuno. He entered the city. The town was deserted as always. Edgar thought he was able to avoid the girl. He even /exall to make sure he wont get any floods.

However....he barely approached the kafra when he heard the same song from his room

Have you seen the wicker man?
The wiker man? The wicker man?

" PLEASE"

Have you seen the wicker man
that walks on Yuno Lane?

"HELP"

He takes his blade out his sheath
Out his sheath, Out his sheath...

" ME"

He takes his Blade out his sheath
and out your heart comes out..."

Edgar spunn around his table. His room was now dimmed and dark.
He looked back at his chat log. Staring as the words flooded his screen.
This is impossible he thought where is the chanting coming from plus earlier patches of the game did not allow flooding already.

Have you seen the wicker man?
The wicker man? The wicker man?


" PLEASE"

Have you seen the wicker man
that walks on Yuno Lane?

"HELP"

He takes his blade out his sheath
Out his sheath, Out his sheath...


" ME"

" WHERE ARE YOU B****!!!" Edgar was angry now. His fist clenching on the mouse of his PC as if it was the real spear he now has taken out.



Have you seen the wicker man?
The wiker man? The wicker man?

" PLEASE"

Have you seen the wicker man
that walks on Yuno Lane?

"HELP"

He takes his blade out his sheath
Out his sheath, Out his sheath...


" YOURSELF"

Then laughter... a laughter coming from the speaker. A laughter of a little girl slowly being coarser and coarser by each chuckle. The song seemed too to come out of the speaker.

" SHOW YOURSELF DAMN IT" Edgar spun the camera around. he looked at his chat log. he realized there was no name on the replys. he was now getting scared...was it a vanguard? A GM?

Suddenly he spotted something peach a tthe side of his screen. A hem of a dress. He walked up. It was the acolyte. "****, what’s you're problem?" he approached the girl.

The girl just laughed and suddenly stabbed him with a small dagger.
"WHAT THE!!!??" Edgar knew that acolytes can handle certain weapons. Daggers included. And worse how can a player attack with in a city.

" ARE YOU A F****N GM?" Edgar shouted, there was a good amount of depletion from his HP.
" Help me....help me please" the acolyte girl hummed. She took another swing at him.

Her dagger could not possible cause such damage and not even a GM only weapon has a dagger like hers, Edgar thought. His HP now was down to 45%.

He ran. He could not attack her from the city even though she could. His best option was outside the map. he ran out towards the map entrance, drinking potions after potion of rejuvejation. He could see her following closely behind.

Edgar was out finally. He noticed one of his guildmates was online and cried out to come and give him a hand. He barely sent out his message when he heard the sound of bells echoing from his game speaker.
Then a slash from behind.

The acolyte has caught up with him and took a fair amount of damage from him. Edgar's spear was now out. He slashed at the girl who seems un phased from his attack.
The fight went on. She was only equipped with a dagger yet she had a speed of an assassin when it comes to slashing through. He made sure he took screenshots of his fight as evidence.
" This must be some rouge GM playing with me..." he thought. He smirk at the thought of humiliating the Vanguards and GM's once he wins this battle.
But they always end in some deadlock

Finally after what seems forever, he was able to to fall his opponent. the girl acolyte was now sprawled on the grass. Her Blue black hair scattered along with her bell bon bons.

Have you seen the wicker man?
The wicker man? The wicker man?
Have you seen the wicker man
that walks on Yuno Lane?"

He takes his blade out his sheath
Out his sheath, Out his sheath...
He takes his Blade out his sheath
and out your heart comes out.

The young acolyte chanted and laughed

The screen faded in and out. By the time the static went away the girl was gone. He decided to walk out when a sandman hit him from underneath and killed his character instatly, Edgar didn not notice his character was at its last HP enough damage for him to be taken down by a mid leveled monster.

He was spawned back to Prontera. He laugh laughed at the folly he just got with the sandman yet the thought of his experience with the acolyte made the hairs on his back stand. Since when did sound effects from headgears came out?
He though of Nathaniel and his Bogus story. He was going to tell him he defeated his so called urban serial PK Botter.

11: 56 PM It was late. Edgar felt the need to go to the bathroom. He left his character at the usual pub which was now empty and proceeded to take a wiss.

In the toilet as he was washing up, Edgar heard the slight trickle of chimes... no like little bells from a distance. He ignored it and proceeded back to his computer.
To his shock, his character was NOT in Prontera but back in Yuno...in some room. Sprawled. Dead.

Edgar tried to re-spawn back to Prontera, but his screen kept returning him to the same spot and on the same position.

Odd. His character had something different on it. The sprite was laid down not its like supposed to when a Lord Knight dies. He realized there was a dagger impaled on his characters chest. And a small pool of blood underneath.
That was impossible for no action can be seen in any Ragnarok Online Gme

Before Edgar could even reply, his screen went on static once more, going up and down the monitor...slowly as each screen passes he noticed a line coming from the chat box
a Line that sent shivers throughout his veins.

HELP ME...
HELP...
ME...










KILL YOU.


BZZZTTTT

The screen went dead. Everything went dead. The lights, the coputer, the fan.
Black Out? Edgar thought as he fumbled for his cellphone for a light. The lights suddenly went back up, however his cellphone didn’t seem to have a signal.

" Damn it!" Edgar cursed. Scanning the room for a GSM signal. Nothing
worse his computer didn’t seem to respond to turning on.

Must be the power cord he thought. Edgar went under to check on the power cord, when the lights flickered again. Edgar quickly pulled out the power cord to his computer however from the shadows he noticed a light he knew was coming from his monitor.

The room went dark.

Edgar stood up. His heart was now beating really fast, he was now afraid. he was holding the power cord to his PC. And was staring through a lit screen of his computer monitor.

The words scrolling up of the screen as if invisible hands were typing them

HELP ME HELP ME
KILL YOU KILL YOU
KILL YOU KILL YOU!

Then he heard bells... from behind him. Closer.
So close
so close as if it could touch. As if it could hurt.
Could Kill

"Have you seen the wicker man?
The wicker man? The wicker man?"

Edgar closed his eyes and tried to ran but he was frozen in place.

Have you seen the wicker man
that walks on Yuno Lane"

More bells, louder... closer

*tinling*

He takes his blade out his sheat
Out his sheath, Out his sheath...

The room has now grown cold, he could hear footsteps behind him.

He takes his Blade out his sheath

Edgar opened his eyes and spun around.
The lights were now back on.

It was silent. Everything was back normal. He breathed out a sigh of relief. Must be his imagination. He needs to stop playing late so at night and drinking, he drank beer earlier. He must be drunk. Damn Nathaniel and his stupid stories.

Edgar turned around. The room was back to being dark.
And in front of him a woman in peach cleric clothes.
Stained in dark blood. With a dagger on her hand.
On the other was a heart. Still palpitating, each beat getting weaker and weaker.


"and out your heart comes out..."
She hummed coldly with a deathly smile on her bloodied face.

Edgar looked on his chest... a gaping hole was on his left shirt, blood flowing.

The girl approached him.... she wanted now more than his heart.

*Tingling*

ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!




END

This post has been edited by Malaya: Sep 26 2006, 03:05 AM

[Nilathiel]

Grammar. Goodness, did you double-check this for errors? Typos everywhere, ellipses are overused. Oh and yeah. The worst error a writer could commit: FRAGMENTS.

I'm going to take some painkillers. Reading your fic gave me a headache. >_< I'll do a more comprehensive proofreading once I'm feeling better. @_@

This post has been edited by Nilathiel: Sep 26 2006, 08:38 AM

[Anstice]

Grammar. Goodness, did you double-check this for errors? Typos everywhere, ellipses are overused. Oh and yeah. The worst error a writer could commit: FRAGMENTS.

I'm going to take some painkillers. Reading your fic gave me a headache. >_< I'll do a more comprehensive proofreading once I'm feeling better. @_@

I'd have to agree with her (IMG:style_emoticons/default/laugh.gif)

[Thor94]

at least her/his story makes me feel happy in an odd way to be not playing in urdr in america

[Yamimakai]

still, it's a good halloween story (IMG:style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

[_-Harry'sRival-_]

still, it's a good halloween story (IMG:style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

AGREE ^^ (IMG:style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)

[Malaya]

Proofreading is hard when i wrote this in the dark.
Actaully this story just popped out 10 mins from the time it was posted.
Otokomae and I were talking about Bots when I said, it would be great to make a serail killer bot story.
I got a little excited and wrote the story while it was PURELY raw in my brain.

Not to mention my relatives told me a story of some humming they heard in their room at night so I decided to add that in the storyline.

OTOKOMAE dalian mo sa half nung fic huhuhu

[Marinelle]

i. can. feel. the. spookiness.

ahh!~ so spooky... especially the last part. and then the song... oh no, i don't want an LSS right now! ~___~

[Heathen]

@Nilathiel
Don't be hard now, dearie. XD (where is the original post?!)

Proofreading is hard when i wrote this in the dark.

So the monitor isn't giving much light, eh? Uh-huh. Please be more careful next post, that's the simple point. No need to make excuses. =D

A friendly reminder for everyone, writing in the dark is not healthy. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

[Nirvelli Sakray]

Too bad the only Ghost Story I have is non-RO related

* is itching to tell ( Ghost hunter back in Highschool)*

[Nilathiel]

Why don't we designate ghost stories in the Fanfare, RO-related or not, for the sake of the coming Halloween holidays? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) I'd love to hear yours, Sakura-kun.

This post has been edited by Nilathiel: Sep 27 2006, 08:00 AM

[Nirvelli Sakray]

Ill need to ask first thread starter. And mine are true experiences.
Not to mention I need to ask permission from Mr. Higher Authorities

[Nilathiel]

Ghost stories are ghost stories after all. (IMG:style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) We make a different thread for that.

[imperfect]

I commend for having such an interesting concept however that way it was presented was bad. You have an interesting concept and a nice solid plot but its beauty is hampered by structural and grammatical problems.

For structural, I'm guessing you typed the story directly in the post rather than copy-pasting it from a word program. My advice then is to type it in MSword and run a spell and grammatical check on it. That would solve a few problems.

Tips for the next installment:

1. Separate dialogues into new paragraphs. And leave one space after every dialogue so that it looks neat.

2. Shifting tenses. Try to limit the shifting. Stay in one tense to have continuity.

3. S-V agreement. Polish up on it. Practice! Practice! Practice!

4. Ellipses. Use only when you want to emphasize something. Otherwise, a period will do.

5. As for fragments, while generally it is ok to use them to emphasize something, it is still good practice to avoid them and adopt a more conventional method of emphasizing something.

6. Typos.

Please do remember that spelling and grammatical errors gives a fic the semblance of being half-baked and messy. With that said, please do improve in these technical aspects since errors may distracts readers from actually enjoying your story.

Good luck and happy writing (IMG:style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

This post has been edited by imperfect: Sep 27 2006, 11:13 AM

[Nilathiel]

*makes a red mark on imperfect's review*

o.o

*runs before she is bricked*

XD

[imperfect]

A red mark??? NOooooooooooooooooo!!! (IMG:style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)

Sorry about that.

*gets out of the thread*

[LittleFaeriePrin...]

ok ung story...however, like what the others said, naging pangit dahil sa presentation...

it still was good though (IMG:style_emoticons/default/ph34r.gif)

[Thor94]

anu pede na ba maglagay ng sariling storya? tambaktambak ang nand2 sa ulo ko lalu na ung

[liureiyi]

hindi ko na napansin mga typos,.

pagkakanta ko pa lang nung song,.. kinilabutan na ko eh,..

err,.. taga-urdr kase ako,.. tapos uhhm,.. posibleng patayin din mee,.. noooooo
tapos binabasa ko yung story halos parehong oras dito sa pc,... nooooooo

pasaway pa yung mga ng-miss call saka nagtext,..nagulat tuloy ako,.. /pif


~ awww,.. carried away masyado,.. ~

/no1 babalikan ko na itong thread na ito,..(IMG:style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

This post has been edited by liureiyi: Sep 28 2006, 12:16 AM

[Malaya]

@ all my proofreading typo grammar critics
Like what Silent one one time said
GAHH Accursed Edit restriction. I would edit it now but I cant anymore.

@ Sakura
Go Knock yourself out with Ghosts stories as much as you want

@ History of the Story
The Humming is part real. Like I said a relative of mine told me the story of the house we are renting now. They hear coughing and humming at night.
I got the inspiration to make the fic from

1. Hate bots
2. Hate arrogant Guildmasters
3. True ghost experience
4. Has the Bloddy Mary urband legend in it
5. Used the concept of putting famous writers as character names making Edgar Allan Poe as the lead because he wrote stories like The Tall tale Heart and The Raven which are one of the greatest creepy stories and poems of all time.

@ Original RO Ghost Story
Since Otokomae has my original fic.... and hasnt given back to me yet as a pun the forword of that fic will have an actual conversation that we both had when I was proofreading the fic. Its kinda funny too.

@ Otokomae, I know ur reading this.... nasan na fic??

[Nirvelli Sakray]

@ TS
In that case.

Hmmm maybe I should share with you a LUG Ghost story then. The story is not mine to tell but Nirvelli's during her visit to LUG last year

She and a friend visited then unrenovated new floor for LUG. There were rumors that the place was haunted. Not only the new office but the whole building itself.
Pacific Star Building is one of the oldest buildings in Makati, survided the 1990 earthquake and had its share of major interior rennovations.
Rumors of the buildings, unknown residents have been going on even before LU took their office there.

Nirvelli's friend was the type of adventurous one can can see ghosts and other supernatural things.
According to what she told me at around 7pm or 8pm at night while waiting for some other friends they decided to visit the unfinished new floor.
Bad move. The lights were not installed yet so when the elevator door open it was pitch black. Nonethe less due to the coaxing of her friend they went in anyway, and when the elevator door closed there was no more light.
Here's when the story gets hazy cause she only told me this. How they were able to navigate without a flash light around I don't know but Nirvelli told me she used the light from her cellphone. (thats my girl)
But when couldn't take the scary feeling over not to mention due to the blind darkness she could not find the wall were the elevator was, she insisted her friend to go back downstairs.
But bad luck. They only walked not too far from the elevator hall they can't find their way back ( I blame it on darkness).
Nirvelli admitted to me she had a slight panic attack cause she was more scared of getting stuck in a floor with no lights, no guards and worse wheres the elevator.

When she finally found the push buttons she activated it and told me that that was the longest 3 mins wait ( for the elevator to come up) that she ever had in her life. She never let go of her friends hand till the door opened and she was the first to enter.

Here's the creepy part. There's a reason why her friend let go of her hand. According to what the friend said when the light came in the room again and Nirvelli entered the elevator, her friend saw from the left side of the hallway a figure staring at them. In fact he was feeling it the moment the doors closed on them when they first entered the floor but didn't tell Nirvelli untill they got back down, because for fear that she'd totally freak out.

I asked Nirvelli what did she felt when she was up there. She only told me that before she found the door she felt something pulling her left arm to the wall where the push buttons were. She did felt the hair at the back of her neck stand too as if something in the air was heavy.

I Guess my story is Ghost Story number 2 then

[The Silent One]

I wonder which is worse... being able to see spirits or being able to actually feel them.

I kinda heard that the ghosts people actually see are the "malevolent" or "mischievous" kind though. Hmm...

[Nilathiel]

I'll leave Sakura's post untouched. It isn't a work of fiction anyway. *shrug*

As for you, Malaya, just because there's an edit restriction, it doesn't mean you won't proofread it anymore, and that you won't accept any criticism. Keep an open mind, most especially when you see that there IS something wrong.

[RaInEgAdE]

The fic was great no doubt about it.
Although there was many errors & typo's, it is a great fic.
It made my hair stand & made me look around the computer room, (IMG:style_emoticons/default/tongue.gif)

Maybe if this thread booms, we could ask somebody from LU to publish this? (IMG:style_emoticons/default/happy.gif)

[Malaya]

I'll leave Sakura's post untouched. It isn't a work of fiction anyway. *shrug*

As for you, Malaya, just because there's an edit restriction, it doesn't mean you won't proofread it anymore, and that you won't accept any criticism. Keep an open mind, most especially when you see that there IS something wrong.

Ohhkay
First I didnt say anything about NOT accepting criticism. If the delete button wasnt uhh deleted maybe I would have deleted the fic and reposted it with the porper corrections and yes have someone proffread it for me
Hence I have Otokomae take the original fic of the thread and he's writing the story/proofreading it for me.

I do know there is something wrong.
I don't know what made you think I was ignoring the criticisms,maybe because my writing style sucks for reasons Lets put this this way
Incompetence on my part

I APOLOGIZE MADAME

My last post was more of thanking people about liking at the message it was trying to give.

This thread is not only for me btw. Its the first so far I know made for horror stories all to share.

Thats all

[**Fefnir**]

May I ask two questions?
Everybody is allowed to post their own ghost stories in this thread, am I right?
And what is proof reading?

This post has been edited by **Fefnir**: Sep 28 2006, 01:42 PM